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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:36 pm | |
| (*flies in* I JUST GOT BACK FROM DANCE WHAT DID I MISS
P!Rachel: e//u//e) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:42 pm | |
| (I NEED YOU BECAUSE PANTHEON! *tackle* I started poking you on Skype because it's faster than the forums. XD
P!EJ: ... *cough* o///o") | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:47 pm | |
| (*flops* I'm back from Disneyland. =7=') | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:48 pm | |
| (*throws Pantheon at you*) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:51 pm | |
| (Yay...*is still very groggy* =7= PM Pantheon to me if you can...*flops*) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 1:59 pm | |
| (It's a big file, so I'll have to send it as an attachment. XD I'm not quite done editing it yet... I'm adding Chapter 5. *typy typy* Poor Shiloh has the worst job ever.) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:03 pm | |
| (She does? Is it cleaning out Jax's litterbox?) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:05 pm | |
| (Nope. XD Don't you remember what she does?) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:06 pm | |
| (No, as I've said...I'm really groggy. =7=''') | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:32 pm | |
| (XD She infiltrates Sect labs... under the guise of being on clean-up duty. Including handling dead experiments. It's tough emotionally and in many other ways.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:38 pm | |
| (P!Phillip: Oh yeah... And I'm held captive. Whoop de do. -A-"
DON'T SEND IT TO ME YET. I HAVE SCHOOL WORK I HAVE TO DO AND I DON'T WANT TO BE DISTRACTED.) | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 2:45 pm | |
| (I can't wait to read it. ^w^) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:05 pm | |
| (It's okay, Blueh, I'm not quite done anyway! I'll send it to both of you when I finish Chapter Five. XD) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:16 pm | |
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Silverfur Devashroud Healer
Posts : 4706 Join date : 2014-05-29
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:18 pm | |
| (*is doing schoolwork* ... *looks down and sees a big sketch dump instead of work*....How...) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 4:38 pm | |
| (Chirpy, remember last night when we were talking about when P!Kaura seduces P!Roy in the book? Well... I found the two books that I have that have different 'types' of fade to black sex, and I wouldn't mind reading them to you to sort of give an idea for what you could do.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:05 pm | |
| (*already embarrassed* I looked back at some books I have, too. I haven't read many that have fade to black, but I had two examples of different ways they did it. The first essentially cut the chapter before much happened aside from kissing. The second had some more stuff happen with "censored" detail, almost. I'll probably go somewhere in between. I won't really know until I start writing.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:23 pm | |
| (One of them cuts to black, and ends the chapter after kissing and undressing. The other has multiple chapter breaks; it goes from kissing, a page break, to undressing, a page break, some talk, and then more of an explination about the character's experience, since it was first person. Nothing censored, but more detailed. Just go for what you're comfortable for.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 5:53 pm | |
| (*hides under a blanket* I'm definitely not going to go any further than them being nekked in their fur. XD I'll see what happens... I want it to read right, that's the important thing.) | |
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CharmedPluto Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 6282 Join date : 2014-05-13 Age : 30 Location : Wherever the USAF sends me...
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:21 pm | |
| (*sees talk of Pantheon* I used to be really excited about having Zero in Pantheon but now I'm not so sure. Reason being that we've revamped him and already I'm looking at possibly revamping him a fourth time counting his revamps from other RPs. I dunno... :/ ) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:30 pm | |
| (So far, Zee isn't in it... And he probably wouldn't be a major character. Probably just a military officer of some kind.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:31 pm | |
| (He and Evey never get married or have kids, either, because of Evey's ability making her ethereal at all times. It'd be a heartbreaking romance, since he can't touch her... Not even so much as a hug.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:35 pm | |
| (-shrug- I'm not too picky about my orher characters anymore... I now just wanna see President Roy and VP Aaron REALLY BADLY.
THEY ARE MY SWEET CHILDREN.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:37 pm | |
| (*pets them* THEY ARE IMPORTANT BABIES.) | |
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CharmedPluto Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 6282 Join date : 2014-05-13 Age : 30 Location : Wherever the USAF sends me...
| Subject: Re: Kolerin: UNDERGROUND Thu Sep 17, 2015 6:41 pm | |
| (Yeah if it's not too much of a problem could you remove him from it altogether?) | |
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