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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:13 pm | |
| (I only have two pages so far... *headdesk* This damn prologue is requiring a lot of thought.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:15 pm | |
| (What are you putting into it, exactly?) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:24 pm | |
| (Basically the background on the situation, explaining the AU version of how the war is, why it's happening, etc. It's just to get the reader ready for the novel, and it will also establish that the characters are anthros.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:25 pm | |
| (Oh, okay. I see what's going on.) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:29 pm | |
| (Yeaup. o3o The real fun is when I get to start the first chapter. XD) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:30 pm | |
| (What are you planning for the first chapter?) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:35 pm | |
| (Probably introducing when Roy first becomes the President of the rebel nation, because he actually isn't the first. eue) | |
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Silcat Guest
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:51 pm | |
| (Here is the list tell me if you want more characters to be added.
EJ (playable)
Roy (playable)
Flare (playable)
Nani (mentioned)
Winnie (mentioned)
Midnight (mentioned)
Finn (mentioned)
Sue (unlockable)
Matt (mentioned)
Aaralyn (mentioned)
Jesper (mentioned)
Maude (mentioned)
Joss (unlockable)
Chase (unlockable)
Sasha (unlockable)
Pippa (unlockable)
Rosebud (mentioned)
Mako (mentioned)
Rachel (unlockable)
Marie (mentioned)
Ruth (mentioned)
Duelist (unlockable)
Ronald (unlockable)
Tina (unlockable)
Phillip (mentioned)
Shiloh (mentioned)
Greyson (unlockable)
Aaron (mentioned)
Malt (unlockable)
Nick (mentioned)
Stone (unlockable)
Scotty (mentioned)
Swan (unlockable)
Richard (mentioned)
Anna (mentioned)
Ice Princess (unlockable)
Pele (unlockable)
Universe (unlockable)
Death (unlockable)
Yvette (mentioned)
Jinx (mentioned)
Jayden (unlockable)
Wright (mentioned)
Quinn (mentioned)
Jax (mentioned)
Bebe (mentioned)
Fawn (mentioned)
Laura (unlockable)
Celeste (mentioned)
Shay (mentioned)
Alpha (mentioned)
Evey (unlockable)
Paris (mentioned)) |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 6:59 pm | |
| (That's a lot... o.o' I don't fully understand your reasoning as to which characters can be unlocked to play with and which cannot. I don't see why Pippa, Joss, and Swan would be someone to be unlocked, but Shiloh wouldn't be. I think too many more minor characters were chosen to be unlocked. Characters like Death, Rachel, and Evey make more sense, though, because they are powerful or important, or both.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 7:47 pm | |
| (Chirp, what do you mean by the fact that Roy isn't the first 'President' of the rebel nation....? Please tell me someone doesn't die.... ono'
And I agree with Chirp on that... I mean, I understand if developing a moveset would be hard for some characters (like Phillip with his clairvoyance and seizures), but there are too many minor characters... And I don't even remmeber who Paris is. ^^' ) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 7:51 pm | |
| (*is being secretive* Shhh, I dun tell you nothing... I'm on page six now, finally, since I started the actual first chapter. XD The prologue is only two pages long, but it works.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 7:53 pm | |
| (Butbutbut.... ono CHASE NO! *is the first one I think of and holds onto him tightly* *sob* </3 ;~;
Roy: ....
Also, can I read the prologue...? ouo"?) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 7:56 pm | |
| (Why yes, yes you can. o3o *goes to copy-and-paste it*
Chase: *is suddenly and violently hugged* ono?!?!) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 7:58 pm | |
| (Yay! o7o
*goes back to crying and practically glomping Chase* YOU CAN'T DIE! ;~; YOU JUST CAN'T! AS MUCH AS CHIRP DOESN'T WANT ROY TO DIE IS ME TO YOU! </3
Roy: ....) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:01 pm | |
| (Chase: But what if I'm not going to die and you're freaking out over nothing?! ono' *awkwardly holds Blueh* C-calm down... please...?
On le story page is le short prologue. XD I might fix it later but it works for now.) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:02 pm | |
| (I WILL NEVER CALM DOWN UNTIL I KNOW FOR SURE! T^T *dies*
And okay. owo *goes over to read it*) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:10 pm | |
| (Chase: *awkwardly pets Blueh's head* I-It's fine... omo' ...
HEY ROY. HEY. HEY YOU. YOU'RE MARRIED! o7o <333333) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:13 pm | |
| (*clings onto Chase like a parasite and just refuses to let him go* </3
Roy: 'uh....? o////o"
Rachel and Anna: ouo?
XDDDDD ) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:19 pm | |
| (Chase: *gently holds* omo' ...
The cuteness and drama to ensue with being married will be so AWESOME! <3
Laura: Oh dear... drama... ^^'
Every married couple has their issues! It's healthy. Right now your issue is kinda sad, though, and nothing either of you can help.
Laura: What is it...? omo
You want babies but don't have any yet.
Laura: Oh... wait, I have issues getting pregnant?! ;A; That's so heartbreaking...
But you eventually do have babies! Don't worry! ouo") | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:23 pm | |
| (</3 *dies*
Aw no.... D8 ....Well, at least both of you get the frickle frackle. XD
Roy: O////O"
Hurhurhur..... eue" There's always a bright side to things.... But it is still kind of sad... But Jacques better come soon! *dies*) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:25 pm | |
| (Roy's face... XDDDDD Yes, Roy! You have a lot of "quality time" with Laura in an attempt to make children. It happens.
Sasha: *elbows Aaron and snickers* Hehe, look at his face right now...
Laura: o////o' Meep...) | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:27 pm | |
| (YOU GET THE FRICKLE FRACKLE~! 8DDDDD *celebrates* AT LEAST YOU WON'T DIE A VIRGIN~!
Roy: *practically locks himself in his room* O//~//O'
Aaron: Wow.... *snickers*) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:30 pm | |
| (OMIGAWD BLUEH! XDDDDDD *dies laughing*
Laura: Oh dear.... o//m//o' Roy?
Sasha: *bursts out laughing* He's worse than you, Chase!
Chase: I dunno... >///>') | |
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Blueleaf Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 14431 Join date : 2014-04-03 Age : 24 Location : Shipper hell
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:32 pm | |
| (I'M ON TUMBLR~! YOU'RE WELCOME! 8D
Roy: >//~//<"
Aaron: Holy crap.... He'sh more pitiful than I thought.....
XDDDDD) | |
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Chirpingsong Devashroud Second in Command
Posts : 9239 Join date : 2014-04-04
| Subject: Re: Oh mai... This is new... Wed May 07, 2014 8:36 pm | |
| (No accents in the book, though... I didn't want to have to struggle every time I wrote some dialogue... ^^' Sorry Brodeurs!
... And oh gawd I have my big test early tomorrow morning and I'm starting to freak out again... oAo') | |
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